Poem a day for 9 April 2013: you are the banished

Last night I went to the 10th anniversary celebration of Poets’ Corner, a wonderful poetry group that hosts guest poets every month (Alison Flett and I were guest readers at the most recent one in January, which was the evening before friend and poet John Pfitzner passed away). Yesterday’s celebrations included a tribute to John. Sean Gilbert delivered a moving opening speech about poetry and prayer, and how poetry, like prayer, is a ‘reaching out’.

I was thinking more about this, and about how some prayers are poetry in and of themselves, if you slough away the heavy chains of association with man’s religious prejudices.

Raised a Roman Catholic, my childhood was sprinkled with learning and ‘reciting’ prayers. I wondered what poem I could rescue from a selection of prayers that I know so well. I chose seven: the ‘Our Father’, the ‘Creed’, the ‘St Patrick’s Breastplate’, a ‘Guardian Angel’ prayer, the ‘Salve Regina’, Psalm 23 (‘The Lord is my Shepherd’) and the ‘Act of Contrition’. To be consistent I took the text from here.

you are the banished

Almighty guide descended
eyes of earth toward evil resolve.
In the darkest valley of temptation
a quiet stranger
sighs,
dies.

Spirit me to forgiveness
beside rose waters,
beneath the light of grace,
behind gracious power;
restore me to hope
above buried heaven
near a hallowed presence
through days of mercy;
lead me to believe
that the worthy shall lead,
that a god shall comfort,
that tears for a mother and father
are tears of an angel,
that to walk above waters
is communion with earth
and that when life and light are done
I shall come
in from exile.

Comments

10 responses to “Poem a day for 9 April 2013: you are the banished”

  1. yallana Avatar
    yallana

    So beautiful x

  2. Jen Avatar

    Thank you Yallana! xo

  3. Josephine Avatar
    Josephine

    works as a prayer in itself; eases the fear of ‘afterlife’ for me. Makes me wonder how the ‘feel’ of rescued texts can be reproduced without actually reproducing them.

  4. Jen Avatar

    Thanks Josephine. I think you’ve answered your own question. This poem/prayer was rescued from prayers, so the prayerful feeling has been retained. Not my particular intention, it just happened that way. 🙂

  5. Robert Avatar

    We need to have a talk about this! 😉 xo

  6. Marianne Musgrove Avatar

    It’s as if the original words were infused with incense and the fragrance remains in the reworking. Very beautiful.

  7. Jen Avatar

    Okay, Robert! 🙂

  8. Jen Avatar

    Thank you for that beautifully scented feedback, Marianne! 🙂

  9. russpoet Avatar
    russpoet

    And the result reinforces your point. Some payers are poetry. Some poems, like this one, are prayers. and the label doesn’t matter.

  10. Jen Avatar

    Exactly Russ. We try to pigeon-hole too much, sometimes. Many things we do in life could be defined as a prayer, if we chose to.

    Thanks for commenting! 🙂

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