It's day 10 of
National Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo).
I was somewhat ambitious today. I wanted to write an acrostic poem (one where the first letter of every line spells out a word or phrase). Then I was thinking about
Oscar's Law (the campaign to abolish puppy factories) and how greedy some dog breeders are.
Suddenly the poem became an ode for Oscar, with a rhyming scheme of ABABCDCDE.
Of course if I had more time I would rework it thoroughly, but this is a poem-a-day exercise so you get to see my poem in all its early-draft glory.
Oscar's Law advocates: feel free to use this in your campaigns if it suits (with attribution, is all I ask).
Let me know what you think in the comments box. I'd love to hear from you.
Oscar's ode
Oh puppy factory bitches please know how
Sorry I am for what you’re going through
Churning out those puppies; (take a bow
All you greedy breeders, would that you
Rot in filthy cages, like your prey;)
Sad and outraged I am, how I wish
Lovely ones like you weren’t locked away
Awaiting certain death, a bitter dish:
(
We humans have a lot to answer for.)
Older than we know, our lives entwined
Since ancient times dogs lived and worked with man
Co-existing, hunting, wits combined
And probably helped prehistoric clan
Ride out extinction threats; today’s dog stands
Socially perceptive, by our side
Loyal and true, obeying our commands
And we should be true masters, dignified
Without the need to exploit our best friend.
Posted by Jennifer Liston