Rescue Tuesdays #10: Freeze frame

Mayday Mayday, it’s Rescue Tuesday!

I rescued this week’s piece from My Life in Advertising by Claude C Hopkins (p 205) and The sea by John Banville (p 143).

Freeze frame

Summer afternoon pocketing thunderous idleness in the dark.
Erotic encounter
covert kiss
black-and-white screen
flickering
fading
ghosts of desire sitting in pitch-dark intensity
for hours,
manic fumbling,
twitched satisfaction
deprive primal intensity;
confinement
reputation,
balls for breakfast
conscious phantoms lurch
from joy to grey
approve to disreputable
filled fingers to wanton waste,
picture-house main feature to forgotten poverty.

Comments

4 responses to “Rescue Tuesdays #10: Freeze frame”

  1. Robert Avatar
    Robert

    Now I am really lost for words!!! 🙂

  2. Beckie Avatar
    Beckie

    Wow!

  3. Jen Avatar
    Jen

    How unusual, Robert! xoxo 😉

  4. Jen Avatar
    Jen

    Thanks Beckie (I think!)… it’s another strange one. Like all these ‘rescuees’, they’re a bit different to my normal style. xo

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