NaPoWriMo 8 April 2012: Cloud watching

It’s day eight of National Poetry Writing Month (NaPoWriMo).

I never know where a poem is going to go. Today’s one was kick-started by the lovely idea of cloud reading from this post at Seedlings in Stone.

Feel free to comment – don’t be shy!

Cloud watching

They both lie hand in hand on shelled ground,
trying to distinguish
dragons feeding on ice-cream cones
a dog and a bird, flying together,
white cotton wheels rolling across their childhood blue.
no blue here.
gazing up through hazy dust
through dim building shapes
through street lights, long extinguished,
through a heavy film of history
at a sky racing towards them;
sounds of planes
grow louder again
whine of alarms
begins again
as their light folds to dark
and clouds implode
into a single point.

Comments

2 responses to “NaPoWriMo 8 April 2012: Cloud watching”

  1. Mike Avatar

    Like it. 2nd World War feel to it. Air raid sirens, blitz. Is that what you had in mind? Nice mix of innocence and threat.

  2. Jen Avatar

    Thanks MH… yep that’s where it went. Even though I started off the poem all bright and breezy, the word ‘shelled’ pulled me somewhere dark.

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