Poem a day for 5 April 2013: éclat de conscience

Today I was reading through contemporary conceptual poet Caroline Bergvall’s ‘Eclat’.

A statement from it hopped into my awareness and swung around the beams there:

‘Where are you not who.’

No question mark.

No punctuation.

So of course I wrote a poem. When re-reading it, I realised that it touched on the idea that there is no trace of an author’s self in conceptual writing – unlike more traditional poetry, where the self of the writer/poet/narrator is apparent.

éclat de conscience

where are you not who:
you might peek around the edge
of a deconstructed sentence
or curl up, contortioned,
in the shelf of an A,
drape yourself languidly
in delirious-sounding prose,
meander through memory-loss
in mis-spelt words,
imitate the yellow blob
that means something
(but not everything)
to someone.
wherever you are
you’ll not discover
who I am
here

Comments

6 responses to “Poem a day for 5 April 2013: éclat de conscience”

  1. Mike Avatar

    But no matter how you try, I can hear your voice in the poem.

  2. Russ Avatar
    Russ

    So clever! Love the way you think. But Mike’s right – didn’t realise it till he said it, & maybe it’s because I know you, but when I read this I heard your voice.

  3. Robert Avatar

    It is so hard to un-know who you are but if I could (which I’d rather not) I’d be certain of where just as you describe. Wonderfully though provoking.

  4. Jen Avatar

    That’s interesting Mike…I wonder what of me you hear.

  5. Jen Avatar

    Thank you Russ, and hmmmmm, now you and Mike have got me wondering….

  6. Jen Avatar

    The un-know day would be a sad day, Robert. xoxo

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